The color is one of the better ways to understanding about our world. Every day we can see numerous colors. Pants, flowers, animal, sky, the earth have different color. By color we recognize also seasons. Winter is white, spring is green, summer is red and autumn is yellow. The different colors warning us about poisonous foods or dangerous things. For example, by color we recognize cold and hot things. Color also is very important in our daily lives.
Firstly, red and green color is use in traffic. All the children know the rule – “Red stop, green go”. If you were going to fast then you had pulled off of car this blue and red light. Ambulance use Red Cross. All of our modern life uses signs with different colors.
Secondly, without colour, artist would not be able to draw any pictures. Well-know artist did hundreds of paintings. They painting combined vivid with original ideas which made this painting amazing. We cannot experience artist life we can feel the passion. Art is a way of discovering history.
So, I am agreeing what the colour makes the world a more richer and interesting. Colour can influence our emotion and mould our character. If we did not have any colour our world would be really boring and soulless.
суббота, 28 ноября 2009 г.
среда, 28 октября 2009 г.
Do people spend too much money on pets?
In Western countries, people spend a lot of money on their pets. They buy special food for their cats or dogs, buy them toys and often pay high fees for medical treatment. Some people think this is a waste of money and argue that pets are dirty and dangerous.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having pet? Do people spend too much money on pets?
me trying (first version)
The pets have a big role in the modern Humen's life. During the wars or disaster the animal rescue and help people. Animal and human ties century-old history. In spite of that
we should not spend a lot of money on cats or docs. In my opinion we have next resons.
Firts of all, everyday thousends of human die of hunger. This money could be spent on food for people. Buy drugs and create basic education.
Second of all, the special food for cats or dogs is a big business which selling dreams. Usual human food are often suitable for animals. Unfortunaly people believe in advertising.
Finally, according to the Bible we have to use animal for improving our daily life. Otherwise, animal use human. I think it is not right.
So, money that use for food or toys must be use increase living conditions of human and them only for pets.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having pet? Do people spend too much money on pets?
me trying (first version)
The pets have a big role in the modern Humen's life. During the wars or disaster the animal rescue and help people. Animal and human ties century-old history. In spite of that
we should not spend a lot of money on cats or docs. In my opinion we have next resons.
Firts of all, everyday thousends of human die of hunger. This money could be spent on food for people. Buy drugs and create basic education.
Second of all, the special food for cats or dogs is a big business which selling dreams. Usual human food are often suitable for animals. Unfortunaly people believe in advertising.
Finally, according to the Bible we have to use animal for improving our daily life. Otherwise, animal use human. I think it is not right.
So, money that use for food or toys must be use increase living conditions of human and them only for pets.
понедельник, 26 октября 2009 г.
Diagram: Greenhouse effect
In the Academic Writing Module you may be given to description about diagram or graph. You should spend only 20 minutes on this task and you should write at least 150 words. The next topic shows a simple. I tried to write this task. The name of Thema - "Greenhouse Effect". I can't show you diagramm becouse i don't have time to copy from book.
"Greenhouse Effect"
The diagram shows a process of climate changes. Everyday we use more and more fossil fuels for our daily lives. We are continue to cutting down forests. Soon after, the waste in the from of carbon dioxide and other gases emit hude clouds, which pollute the atmospgere. In result, the natural system is out of balance. The gases trap heat which would normally escape
into space, thus producing the 'greenhouse effect'. In this case, the warming increases water vapour in the air, and more heat is absorbed into the atmosphere. If carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases continue to pour into the atmosphere unchecked, the world will warm rapidly. Rising temperatures will melt snow and ice, and sea levels will rise. Many of the Earth's cities are built on the coast, and a rise in sea level will spell disaster for them.
"Greenhouse Effect"
The diagram shows a process of climate changes. Everyday we use more and more fossil fuels for our daily lives. We are continue to cutting down forests. Soon after, the waste in the from of carbon dioxide and other gases emit hude clouds, which pollute the atmospgere. In result, the natural system is out of balance. The gases trap heat which would normally escape
into space, thus producing the 'greenhouse effect'. In this case, the warming increases water vapour in the air, and more heat is absorbed into the atmosphere. If carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases continue to pour into the atmosphere unchecked, the world will warm rapidly. Rising temperatures will melt snow and ice, and sea levels will rise. Many of the Earth's cities are built on the coast, and a rise in sea level will spell disaster for them.
воскресенье, 11 октября 2009 г.
Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much as they should with their families or on leisure activities. What is your opinion
In many counties often told about the reduction working hours. The dreams about more leisure activities in twenty one century were broken. The higher technologies didn’t make any free times for peoples life. We have been working more and more. We don’t have more money, we don’t have more rest and we don’t have more happiness. The future of today are difference the future of the pass.
First of all, I would like to say that too long working hours make peoples more stressed. Peoples don’t have enough free time for rest, sleeps and leisure of course. That’s reasons of many diseases and rapid aging. In result, we have been died with regret about stupid and boring life. We did not know about environment and we don’t know about any family’s happiness. It is very terrible.
Second of all, short working hours will have created new jobs. In this case the economics of many countries would be increases. Most of peoples will have job and money. Most of people will have more leisure activities and rest their families. We will have less hunger and died. Peoples will have started think about kids and beautiful of lives.
Finally, short working hours will have created more free time for making new ideas. People could be thinking about changes of lives and making more and more interesting things. We were born for building. We weren’t born for job. We have only one life. It is all that we have. Everybody must be having chosen.
После просмотра данного эссе были сделаны следуюшие замечания:
Привожу немного проработанную версию:
It’s known in many countries told about the reduction working hours. The dreams about more leisure activities were broken in twenty one century. High technologies didn’t make any free times for peoples life. We have been working more and more. We don’t have more money, we don’t have enough rest and we don’t have much happiness. Today’s future is different from our understanding of the future in the past.
First of all, I think that too long working hours make peoples more stressed. People don’t have enough free time for rest, sleeping and leisure of course. That’s reason of many diseases and rapid aging. In result, we will die with regret about stupid and boring life. We did not know the environment and we don’t know about any family’s happiness. It is very terrible. My old friend worked hard and now, he doesn’t have wife, kids and youth. He also stressed and can’t found an interesting job.
Second of all, short working hours will create new jobs. In this case the economics of many countries would be increased. Most of people will have job and money. Most of people will have more leisure activities and rest their families. We will have less hunger and death. People will start to think about kids and beautiful of lives.
Finally, short working hours will create more free time for making new ideas. People will think about changes of lives and make more and more interesting things. We were born for building. We weren’t born for job. We have only one life. It is all that we have. Everybody must be having chosen.
First of all, I would like to say that too long working hours make peoples more stressed. Peoples don’t have enough free time for rest, sleeps and leisure of course. That’s reasons of many diseases and rapid aging. In result, we have been died with regret about stupid and boring life. We did not know about environment and we don’t know about any family’s happiness. It is very terrible.
Second of all, short working hours will have created new jobs. In this case the economics of many countries would be increases. Most of peoples will have job and money. Most of people will have more leisure activities and rest their families. We will have less hunger and died. Peoples will have started think about kids and beautiful of lives.
Finally, short working hours will have created more free time for making new ideas. People could be thinking about changes of lives and making more and more interesting things. We were born for building. We weren’t born for job. We have only one life. It is all that we have. Everybody must be having chosen.
После просмотра данного эссе были сделаны следуюшие замечания:
- В эссе необходимо употребление сложных оборотов
- Нет примеров "мелких" типа мой знакомы делал то-то и получилось то-то, что было неверным. а все глобально.
- Много не английских конструкций.
- Необходимо поработать с грамматикой (времена) и смыслом.
Привожу немного проработанную версию:
It’s known in many countries told about the reduction working hours. The dreams about more leisure activities were broken in twenty one century. High technologies didn’t make any free times for peoples life. We have been working more and more. We don’t have more money, we don’t have enough rest and we don’t have much happiness. Today’s future is different from our understanding of the future in the past.
First of all, I think that too long working hours make peoples more stressed. People don’t have enough free time for rest, sleeping and leisure of course. That’s reason of many diseases and rapid aging. In result, we will die with regret about stupid and boring life. We did not know the environment and we don’t know about any family’s happiness. It is very terrible. My old friend worked hard and now, he doesn’t have wife, kids and youth. He also stressed and can’t found an interesting job.
Second of all, short working hours will create new jobs. In this case the economics of many countries would be increased. Most of people will have job and money. Most of people will have more leisure activities and rest their families. We will have less hunger and death. People will start to think about kids and beautiful of lives.
Finally, short working hours will create more free time for making new ideas. People will think about changes of lives and make more and more interesting things. We were born for building. We weren’t born for job. We have only one life. It is all that we have. Everybody must be having chosen.
суббота, 19 сентября 2009 г.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people are talking about that parents are the best teachers for their children. Some people think that it is the best way to get good education for their kids. However, other people think that parent can’t know everything that the children have to learn in childhood. This is not easy question to answer but in this essay I will try to look ait this issue.
First of all, the most of people who have kids have lived enough time to distinguish good and bad things in the life. Parents are able to teach and show their children how live in our difficult world.
Second of all, usually they are only one who may be a teacher for their children when they are young. Before kids go to kindergarten they are learning from their parents. They memorize everything of what people around them doing. Also, kids learn by heart men’s words, sounds and behavior. For example, I did not go to kindergarten, so I was at home up to six years. My only and, of course, the best teachers were my parents. From them I found out how to speak, how to behave myself at society, etcetera.
Unfortunally, people can’t know everything. I guess fro this reason each child shoud goes to school, because not every parent is able to know subject as chemistry ot biology.As we can see, there are many aspects to this questions. I think that parents may be the best teachers for their kids not only when children are very young but also when they go to school.
First of all, the most of people who have kids have lived enough time to distinguish good and bad things in the life. Parents are able to teach and show their children how live in our difficult world.
Second of all, usually they are only one who may be a teacher for their children when they are young. Before kids go to kindergarten they are learning from their parents. They memorize everything of what people around them doing. Also, kids learn by heart men’s words, sounds and behavior. For example, I did not go to kindergarten, so I was at home up to six years. My only and, of course, the best teachers were my parents. From them I found out how to speak, how to behave myself at society, etcetera.
Unfortunally, people can’t know everything. I guess fro this reason each child shoud goes to school, because not every parent is able to know subject as chemistry ot biology.As we can see, there are many aspects to this questions. I think that parents may be the best teachers for their kids not only when children are very young but also when they go to school.
пятница, 18 сентября 2009 г.
Write a letter to sports centre’s manager complaining about some problems you have to face when you go to this sports centre.
Dear Mr. Adams,
My name is Eugene. I am a permanent member of your club.
I am writing to draw your attention to several problems I had to face during my last visit to “Rakhat Fitness” sports centre.
First of all, I would like to mention that although I have purchased an annual membership card, no locker was assigned for my personal usage, as it was promised to me. Thus, I have to use different lockers each time I visit your centre, and this is not convenient for me.
Nevertheless, there are two hair-dryers in the changing room for men, furthermore none of them is working properly. As a result, last time I had to leave the building with my hair was wet and, because of that, caught a cold. To my strong opinion, there should be at least one hair-dryer working properly, especially in the winter period, when you can easily get ill if your hair is wet when you get outside the building.
I hope that the above mentioned problems will receive your immediate attention, and trust that the matter with my personal locker will be resolved as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully
My name is Eugene. I am a permanent member of your club.
I am writing to draw your attention to several problems I had to face during my last visit to “Rakhat Fitness” sports centre.
First of all, I would like to mention that although I have purchased an annual membership card, no locker was assigned for my personal usage, as it was promised to me. Thus, I have to use different lockers each time I visit your centre, and this is not convenient for me.
Nevertheless, there are two hair-dryers in the changing room for men, furthermore none of them is working properly. As a result, last time I had to leave the building with my hair was wet and, because of that, caught a cold. To my strong opinion, there should be at least one hair-dryer working properly, especially in the winter period, when you can easily get ill if your hair is wet when you get outside the building.
I hope that the above mentioned problems will receive your immediate attention, and trust that the matter with my personal locker will be resolved as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully
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